Critique these photographs for me?

1- good angle, pretty model. i would contrast the lighting a bit more- make more of a difference between the light and dark.
2- model's leg position looks a bit awkward. also, i would widen the viewpoint a bit to include more
3- creative
4- not enough feeling, it would also be more interesting if it focused on more than just the model on the... bench thing haha forget the name for those swing seat things
5- not the most artistic shot. good setting though
6- amazing. great in black and white. captures lots of emotion. very artistic
7- lots of feeling, i like it a lot. not the biggest fan of the white sunglasses though haha
8- a pretty shot indeed, but not very original
9- good setting and lightining, artistic, i like it a lot, but theres something about the model.. she's not showing enough feeling. maybe she should not look straight at the camera, look past it so we can still see her eyes and the feeling inside them, but not straight at it? idk. something can be improved though to make an even greater statement. my favorite shot though. it has great potential.

good luck on your photography! i really like it

To many unless you want a general comment like they are great or they are crap.

If you desire a decent critique post one or two images.

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Those are really good pictures. You should consider becoming a photographer

THEY ARE AMZING

They're all pretty good!

I think the last one would've been nicer with a lighter background, but that's just my opinion.

wow... these ARE amazing.. if you want my honest critique so they can be better, here they go.

photo 1: the sunlight at the corner could be taken out.. if you used a different spot, you could use a reflector, that way the sunlight can come in, you get both sides of the face without the blinding light flash on the corner.

photo 2: zoom in on the girl more, the background of the houses and cars and whatnot distracts her beauty.

photo 3: use a smaller f-stop _5.6 or 4 to blur the background for a shallow depth of field.

photo 4:take out the chair, use a smaller fstop and zoom in. great photo!

photo 5:zoom out just a little so the girl on the right can show her missing foot..

photo 6: make the girl show a little more emotion, she l;ooks like she IS at a photo shoot, and thats not what youi really want, show sadness, it goes good with the environment.

photo 7: nothing, this is truly picture perfect
(wonderful framing by the way)

photo 8:the flower in the very back could either be cropped out, or zoom out so you can see it, "mergers" arent good.

photo 9: the girl shouldnt look directly at the camera, you may want to create a mood of sadness, and looking at the camera directly shakes the mood slightly.

wow... these photos are amazing! my favs are
photo 7
photo 4
photo 3

photo 1 is my absolute favorite!!

Thanks for sharing your photos, keep taking pictures and classes to learn more.

1. Has nice contrast between light and dark and is well balanced, the light in the right corner is distracting.
2.You have an interesting idea going here, but the subject's pose looks forced and uncomfortable, the background sucks, and the picture needs to be more centered or a closer shot.
3. Nice photo, I like the feeling of motion. The red spots should go away as they do nothing for the composition of the photo.
4. More of a snapshot type photo, as with 2, the background sucks.
5.Twins? Same girl? Interesting because of the obvious action in the photo. Background and composition need work.
6. Interesting as an art photo, did you use filters or photoshop it? How does it look without the softening?
7. Composition and balance in this are very good. How does it look with out the "effects"?
8. The flower in front is out of focus and the seed pod seems to be in focus, I find groups of flowers to be a little difficult to find a good focus, keep working on it.
9. I like how the boards criss-cross and draw the eye to the girl, making her the center of the picture even though she is in the upper left, the vacuum thing is distracting and the "effects" are also a distraction.

i like the one on the roof