How are my monologues? any suggestions please! (Video Included)?

Question: How are my monologues!? any suggestions please! (Video Included)!?

Heey!.
I really want peoples advice on how to make my monologues better!.
I wasn't really working on actual character development in these!.
More facial expressions!.
Please be nice!
Thank you!

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You have a sincerity that is nice!. I agree about working with published material!. You tend to use the same voice in all 3!. And you've a habit of tossing your hair back that shows up over and over in all 3!. But you have an honesty about you!. I think it's good advice about characters!. That's what auditioners want to see - distinct characters!. Working with material that is tried and true will work to your benefit!. But for what they are, I thought they were nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've only looked at a couple of the videos!. Have you done any from published plays!? It's really hard to judge your performance when you're making things up, and especially when you're sitting down!. Character development is what's important - in fact, a lot of teachers discourage focusing on your outside appearances while acting!. You want to connect with the character and feel the emotions, so the facial expressions and movements will take care of themselves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com