How did i do with this monologue? (video included)?

Question: How did i do with this monologue!? (video included)!?

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=7po35JxRC!.!.!.

Thanks!
also just some little information!.
The accent is for the character!. i do television not theatre!.
And i paused alot because i was making it up on the spot and was thinking about what to say next!. haha!.

PLEASE REPLY ON THE YOUTUBE VIDEO!. NOT HERE!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Honestly, uh!.!.!. I liked the emotions, but I did not like listening to your voice (You can change that though)!. Your expressions were really good too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I watched, but I'm not interested in signing on with YouTube, so It's here or nothing!. I liked the material, although I would've given it a rather different reading!. I would have used more anger, and let my hurt and angst show through that!. But that's me!. Your reading was you, and showed great potential!. I agree with the previous two noters!. Don't try to use a monologue that's not fully rehearsed!. And if your planning on taping a monologue to submit somewhere, use a flatscreened backdrop!. The TV in the background and too-cute-for-words bedspread were terribly distracting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Vocally, a little lightweight but there is potential given material that is thought out,, written down, learnt, and rehearsed!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very pretty,thanks for answering my question, o and I ave an agent so that means I will hear about it!?!? You did good Www@QuestionHome@Com

What the freaking crap is that!?!!?!!?Www@QuestionHome@Com