What do you suggest i change for my monologues? i'm just begining. (Video in

Question: What do you suggest i change for my monologues!? i'm just begining!. (Video included)!?

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=7po35JxRC!.!.!.

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*just a suggestion*

I don't know if you are trying to go for a more mature sound or not!. if you are try pulling the "Ah" sound in words like "back" from the back of your mouth into the front of your mouth!. This will make you sound older!.

again I don't know if that is what you want or not, but it's just a thought!.

also, 90% of the dramitic pauses are ok, but some seem to long or not needed!. To many pauses tend to make your "viewer" zone outWww@QuestionHome@Com

you should actually get into character and try and understand how you would feel and feel the eemotions remember you can't play an emotion you have to feel itWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't like how it starts, but you win me in the end!. I don't like the voice though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com