How is my acting? any suggestions? (Video included)?

Question: How is my acting!? any suggestions!? (Video included)!?

Hey! I did a monologue and put it on youtube!.
Can you please tell me how my acting is!?
Please put the comment on the youtube video!. not here!. it's easier!.
Any suggestions to make it better!?
Thank you so much!

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=7po35JxRC!.!.!.

<3Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That was pretty good! I especially liked the end!.
One part that really stood out was when you said "I think I did pretty good!." That was awesome!
The only suggestions I have are not to take so many pauses, and also you have a little bit of a lisp!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are on the right track!.!.!.!.
If you were in the theater you would need to be bigger with everything you do
If you were on film you are over acting
Acting is about being
When you act you need to just BEWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was great hun, you're on the right track!. I would recommend that you take a look at Michael Caine's Acting on Film!. It helped me out a lot!.

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=vvUcJz7Tu!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.!.i thought it was awwesome!.!.u had me going!.!.!.!.i think you got some talent there girl!

ps!.!.!.!.i have the same bedspread lolWww@QuestionHome@Com