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Jamie is a very loved woman in her community in La Jolla near San Diego!. Jamie is a very optimist woman that transfers the joy of living and she's always ready to help everyone!. Jamie became a doctor because she wanted to give a second chance to ill people to enjoy better their lifes or for made more pleasant their journey to the other world!. This woman of great beauty physically and morally has the nickname of "Miss doll"!. The reason of her nickname is because she's a very beautiful woman that emanates great youth, like the time doesn't pass for her!. She looks like a bikini model with very long hair that arrives to her hips and she has big breasts!. Jamie's slender figure is the result of her mother's Edith genetics but also is because she has a healthy nutrition!. She's an active homebirth activist because she gave birth to her son Richard at home with a midwife in the late 50's, when few women had a homebirth!.
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is she supposed to sound like wonder woman!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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There are some things I like about your character, but some I find a bit out there!. Jamie, if she was 18 when she had Richard, would now be around 75 years old!. Even if she has good genes and nutritional habits, do not be fooled: age catches everyone!. To say she appears eternally youthful is highly complimentary, but you might want to reword the description while keeping her age in mind!. Use a thesaurus, if you have one!. Beautiful women in the late fifties and early sixties quite possibly became doctors but the homebirth mention is more believable!. Frankly, the way you have described Jamie makes her sound like a character!.!.!.an aged Barbie doll, perhaps!?Www@QuestionHome@Com