Am I a good actress? [link included]?

Question:I know this isn't what your supposed to use this site for, but I'm honestly desprate, people won't help me out.

I'm in this contest called "Best Acting Skills" and I'm in dyer need to win. So could you please vote me a ten or anything above 5.

PLEASE!

I will love you FOR EVER!

Also, any tips you have on how I can improve, would be appreciated:

http://www.sugarloot.com/entry/34061279

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I know this isn't what your supposed to use this site for, but I'm honestly desprate, people won't help me out.

I'm in this contest called "Best Acting Skills" and I'm in dyer need to win. So could you please vote me a ten or anything above 5.

PLEASE!

I will love you FOR EVER!

Also, any tips you have on how I can improve, would be appreciated:

http://www.sugarloot.com/entry/34061279

Could use some work. It seemed fake and you overacted. You should work on saying the lines like you mean them, like you would in real life. Make it more authentic and real.

yeah i guess..............................but u seemed a little fake