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Question:I have to do a newscast about the death of romeo and juliet ...let me know if this is good.

Newscaster Anna: Welcome to ?___? International News. It is Monday, June 2nd and we have clear skies. Emily is live in Verona with astonishing news, Emily.
Newscaster Emily: Thanks Anna. We have groundbreaking news! Romeo Montague and Juliet Capulet were found dead tonight in the Capulet family tomb. People all over the world have been aware of the feud between the families, but what would have lead them both to die? One week ago Romeo was banished from this city for the murder of Juliet’s cousin, Tybalt. Rumor has it that Juliet and Friar Lawrence met and made a plot that involved some of Friar’s deadly herbs. Later that day our witnesses say that Juliet was found dead in her bed. Romeo had then returned to Verona, with the news of Juliet’s death. He too finds some way to get his hands on poisonous liquid. What authorities haven’t quite understood is that Juliet was found with

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I have to do a newscast about the death of romeo and juliet ...let me know if this is good.

Newscaster Anna: Welcome to ?___? International News. It is Monday, June 2nd and we have clear skies. Emily is live in Verona with astonishing news, Emily.
Newscaster Emily: Thanks Anna. We have groundbreaking news! Romeo Montague and Juliet Capulet were found dead tonight in the Capulet family tomb. People all over the world have been aware of the feud between the families, but what would have lead them both to die? One week ago Romeo was banished from this city for the murder of Juliet’s cousin, Tybalt. Rumor has it that Juliet and Friar Lawrence met and made a plot that involved some of Friar’s deadly herbs. Later that day our witnesses say that Juliet was found dead in her bed. Romeo had then returned to Verona, with the news of Juliet’s death. He too finds some way to get his hands on poisonous liquid. What authorities haven’t quite understood is that Juliet was found with

Sounds very good. Accurate information, and very newscastery.

sounds fun! Sounds Very Professional. as for the ?____? you could have it be a little funny and say something like ancient news international. bt it sounds great! good job!

Great job!

The only problem I saw were some of your verb tenses... "...Juliet was found dead in her bed. Romeo then returned to Verona, with the news of Juliet's death. He then found a way to get his hands on poisonous liquid. What authorities don't quite understand is that Juliet was also found with..."

Other than that, it's quite good!