I have an essay on My chosen Career which is Acting...can someone help me write

Question:I would set the scene, make it feel like the reader is there, or you're about to go on stage and you feel a rush of anticipation. like
" I peered out into the audience, and my hands were shaking, thoughts rushing from one thing to another. Would I mess up? Would I succomb to failure? No, I wouldn't. I squared my shoulders, lifted my head up high and muttered to myself that I could do this. As I walked on stage, I saw a sea of an audience, but I was ready to swim. This is the rush I live for, the rush of not knowing what will happen. Acting is the only career that provides that element of uncertainty that I live for."
Something like that. Or I don't know. I kinda just wrote that on the top of my head. But make the reader feel like they're there. Use adjectives. Be descriptive. Chose your words carefully.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I would set the scene, make it feel like the reader is there, or you're about to go on stage and you feel a rush of anticipation. like
" I peered out into the audience, and my hands were shaking, thoughts rushing from one thing to another. Would I mess up? Would I succomb to failure? No, I wouldn't. I squared my shoulders, lifted my head up high and muttered to myself that I could do this. As I walked on stage, I saw a sea of an audience, but I was ready to swim. This is the rush I live for, the rush of not knowing what will happen. Acting is the only career that provides that element of uncertainty that I live for."
Something like that. Or I don't know. I kinda just wrote that on the top of my head. But make the reader feel like they're there. Use adjectives. Be descriptive. Chose your words carefully.

it depends on what side of acting you want to show people....you could show them the not so good side by starting out with saying

A career that sometimes brings glamor, fame, and wealth. Other times though it doesn't do any of the sort and can fill your heart with rejection. Acting is a career that is not for the faint at heart.

hope you do well :D...if you want to do a good thing about acting then just model off of that using different words and adding your own stuff.

how about: every actor has to ask the same thing of an audience; please suspend your disbelief.