The title is: hand in hand they will carry on!.
What a placid berth to gaze upon
two lovers dancing in an indubitable
paradise moving with flawless rhythm,
swaying with discrete delicacy
Hand in hand they will carry on
with hearts tensely convolved,
Two souls will intertwine and become one!.
The love desired, will develop immensely and evolve
Beauty will takes it's own course
The beat of rhythm will dissever
and this perfect paradise will fall beyond endeavor
If they allow doubts to fill their thoughts
Two lovers will be divided and obscured
To learn of the secrets yet to be discovered
And as they go their divided ways they wake a vow
so that no distance can taint their hearts
inseparable the two lovers
a feeling more than just euphoric bliss
like the oxygen that sustains our lungs
they dance one last time
I'm not finished and it will be edited more!.
Any constructive criticism!?