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What is your opinion of my poem's poem!?
CARVED IN STONE
By Elaine Polin
Once my words are written,
sent as photons of light,
they are as carved in stone,
impossible to delete
by their recipient!.
Fearing the keyboard’s power,
in pain, I clench my fist,
that my words' sharp, forged point
not carve a forever wound
into real, virtual flesh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The pen is mightier than the sword, but now it moves at lightning speed and cuts with laser sharpness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I liked this a lot!. Just watch out for sydney k and show some respect!. Both the freak iano!. 2 of his 400 avatars!. This guy really has one lonely life when he has to take another persons avatar!.
I am watching all of you!.
"The Troll Hunter"Www@QuestionHome@Com
On first read, I thought, "I don't do this, I don't worry" but on re-read I realized I do consider the impact, of course, on my reader!. Especially if it's something personally dark and painful!. Great write!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Powerful words,we should heed this message!.As to some of the answers I ask "Show some respect" please do just that!.--Sydney K if you can't say anything nice, then don't say anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hopefully not novel, a poet with a conscience! lol Words however written should have time to settle!. If then indeed they sting, it was the poet's wish, not mistake!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, we all know 'the pen is mightier than the sword!.' We should wield it carefully, even when the 'pen' is a keyboard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Most words seem curt through this machine, unless very careful!.
We should all fear our keyboards power, and seek to tame it!. Well done E!Www@QuestionHome@Com
forget about carving this in stone this is not even worth writing down on paperWww@QuestionHome@Com
find a new hobbyWww@QuestionHome@Com