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Question: How is this poem and what should i change in it!?
Why'd you lead me on!?
Why would you try that on me!?
We've been friends for so long and you lost in completely
I would call you dumb or an imbecile but ill stay here and smirk while you miserable!.


I got in a fight with my guy best friend who ignored me and lead me on and things like that!. So he was doing mean stuff to me now hes miserableWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is such a good poem!.!.!.I really like it!.!.!.!.
Try Http://Www!.poetry!.com
They have free poetry contests, and they've published me before!.
I wouldn't change it in any way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com