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I hold your head between my hands,
you don't pull away as I angle
it, so when you tire of looking down
you are forced to look at me
our eyes connect, but
you don't hear what
they are screaming
you see, yet
my words have failed and
now too, my eyes,
through tears I
we have nothing left
I release your head,
touch is the last thing
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I'd sure like to look into those eyes someday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As much as we care - and try to arrange things - a relationship or communication or solution - takes the co-operation of the object party!. Nothing will change without them wanting to or making the effort!. If assistance is offered - they have to put all their strength into grabbing the offered hand and holding on!. Even though - this knowledge is known - one never ceases to care and continue trying!. The speaker touches caring hearts everywhere with these words - thereby - making touch last forever ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think thats most folks ,you can preach but they dont hear!. Just like that old horse you can lead them to water but if they dont drink you just dont worry about it!. You can cry yourself to death but if those words dont hit their core you have to let it go!.Good poem Ma and sad as well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The eyes can melt hearts of stone, or kill the enemy with a glance!. They are tender, they are strong, they can whisper softly, of scream loud enough for deafness to be penetrated!. Look into my eyes, and tell me what you hear them saying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Nothing"!.!.!.dies!. Is gone forever!.
"Something"!.!.!.always carries on!.
Something to hold!.!.!.when love is gone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am going through something like this is my life!. My love I no longer have for the one I said forever too!. Such is life, I must move on, but I know how it feels to feel it die inside your eyesWww@QuestionHome@Com
Agony the losing of the tie that binds!. You cannot make them see and you cannot make them hear!. Sad and lovely, Ma!.x!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i konw the desperate feeling of having nowhere left to turn, of having nothing left!. sad and beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
I see the eyes and through them the touch is intensified by their love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The eyes can say so much more than talking or touch :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ode to Liquid Death
…the thief of my BelovedWww@QuestionHome@Com
i enjoyed it a lotWww@QuestionHome@Com
lovely poem! but i hate it when anyone holds my head in one place like that!. ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com