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Have time for a Cintress!?
Dreamy eyes directed
Naughty aspirations transpire
Speedy morning rebuffs relief
Measure of man
Held in awkward brambles
Meandering chariot halts
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Very nice write! I Myself do so very much need some assistance,to reconstruct My existence! Or with My naughty aspirations!! LOL!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a new form you are making up of Cin: 5, and Tress: 3!.
I Googled the 5 lines form of poetry, and came up with the Cinquain, but its specifications are different from your 5 lines poetry, so you can't call you form by the same name!. Give it another name ( Cincua, 4 ex:), and hence, you may have a Cincua, CincaDuo (Duo-cincua), Tri-cincua (Cintress), Quad-cincua ( or Cinquad), and a Cinquenette for a poem with five Cincuas!.
As you created this (DAHha-Cincua) form and laid down its specifications, you should be the first to follow those specifications!.
The meter of the last lines of first two stanzas is 4 syllables, while the final line is of 6 syllables unless, your specifications say the last line should be of two words at any number of syllables!.
As to your poem, it is wonderful and very moving live description of a realistic event!. If my girl friend wrote this for me, I would never be able to sleep!! Most of all, you seem to be contentedly in full agreement with your new form!. Thanks for sharing!.!. Good luck!
Edit : 6 syllables final line!. Is that for a Mono- (cinqua) poem, or for the final line in a multi-Cinqua !?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I got time; lay it on me!.
WAIT, do I read these together as a whole or three different ones!?
I had to do some research on "Hat dance"; I didn't come up with much!.
The first one makes me think of tequila, the second--feeling a little rough the next morning, and the third--the awkwardness of waking up to a unmemorable bed-mate!. (How far off am I!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com
*head spinning out of control*
*words smashing into grey matter*
Lovely it is !.!.!. I am now
reconoitering with my existence!.!.!."yes !.!. it needs a restructure!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
if only we could!.!.!.!.!.
I love how you can so easily play around with different forms!.
This is great and I can see how each stanza can stand alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, very nice!.!.!. My favourite line is 'Naughty aspirations transpire'!.!.!. It made me smile!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't know about the form so I can't comment on that!. Love the imagery used in this 'hat dance'!.
deep one this!.
(I sucked in my breath as I started this one--'sudden romance dreamy eyes directed!.!.!.')Www@QuestionHome@Com
If I dance on my hat it don't come out so good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Interesting form! All the hats we all wear!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com