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Question: Tell me what you think of this bit of writing !?
I'm obviously very upset!.

Your idiocy is leading you down a road that will be your fall
And how I yearn for that fall to be long and painful
May there be sharp rocks at the bottom to greet you
I hope someone comes to save you though
So that you might live as a disfigured being
And because you only befriend superficial people
You will be alone
Because you asked me what it will take
Anything it takes, you told me
This is what it’ll take to make me happy againWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is putting it right out there!
sure do not want to get you mad at me! Whew!!
I think I actually like that---Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, a lot of emotions!.!.:DWww@QuestionHome@Com