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Is your imagination working!?
The pastel colors of the evening sky
Sank into the Pacific Ocean!. Layer after
Layer of reds, blues and orange were gently
But firmly sandwiched between the cool hand
Of night, and the submitting reflections that
Still shimmered in defiance as the sea gauged
Itself upon that which would not satisfy its
The sun had long been devoured, snuffed out
As quickly as a child could blow out the candles
On a birthday cake made up of many sweet layers
Of colored sponge!. Knives would plunge deep into
Its heart and once divided asunder; each morsel would
Be greedily gobbled up by ever open ever screaming
Night is gentle to the fading day, for it is by mutual
Friendly persuasion and acceptance that the last
Colors of evening submit themselves to the sea, while
The gloaming cloaks the instance of visual perception
Of embracing lovers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Honestly, Robert! Every single poem you create leaves me simply astounded!. I absolutely love this one!. It's amazing!.
Will there ever be a time when you're writing ceases to astound me!?
Well, done, by the way, Robert!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
My imagination never sleeps!.
It appears yours does not either!.
I not only see but I feel the colors and textures
and my mind is carrying me already away to a place
where my fingers do not traverse the keyboard as my mind is floating
Love, love, love the way you personify natural forces along with so much metaphor and imagery!. And colors! A masterful work of art!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You could not have written a better imagistic poem if 99 people had helped you!!! Or, should that be a thousand!?
Imagination will be the success of you! Cause this works on an early Sunday morning!!!!!!!!!!!
sir you put me to the path of Shakespeare and did not teach me sentence/ and prosaic poetry perhaps in stage two !?maybe!.
Wow, Robert!. For me, a lovely poem to wake up to!. BeautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
Take a bow! Take a rainbow!Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is a great poem!.!. You can trust elsy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is now!.!.!.nicely penned!. Great images!.Www@QuestionHome@Com