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Would you give me some feedback on these Diamonte Poem structures!?
Burrowing, climbing, eating
Fruit, sap, nests, homes
Poisoning, smashing, fighting
Smiling, laughing, flirting
Eyes, lips, hands, feet
Watching, waiting, hesitating
Changing, lighting, bathing
Trees, grass, creatures, secrets
Harbouring, washing, holding
They are not as easy as they look and I am not sure if I got it right!.
each one stands alone, they are not a three verse session!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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i believe i got it so i believe u got it!.!.!.dude!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like these!. I invented an invention like this!. I call it the 'Geom', short for geometric poetry!. I started with a perfect square!. Charles Audette submitted one for TW 2008 book that was a poem drawn to look like a Colt !.45!.!.!.wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I see the first and last, the second is too plain compared to them!.
Love the connections!.
I read everything you write BTW!. I like all, I love most!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really don't know anything about this form of poetry!.!.!. Sorry!.!.!. But from the examples I saw on the internet (did a bit of research)!.!.!. I think it is really good!.!.!. I like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice poem dude!.!.!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like these a lot!. We had a diamante challenge some months ago and the POMs did some great ones!. I might try again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
My favorite is Sky!. These are good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com