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Comments on a poem about the weather, sort of!?
The earth trembles in a quake
as it coughs to
loosen thick phlem!.
The ensuing tidal wave
hits the shore, a
Island volcanoes spew forth
when the earth can no longer
control its bowels,
ridding itself of
Heavens open to cleanse and
cure the earth's ills,
flooding the land
with currents of rain,
washing the streets
and its soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Your explanation is better then sciences!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
MY DREAM! Where'd you get this video!? I thought I had it hid away!.
I can't say enough about this one!. You nailed my favorite theme here, but in a totally different way!. I'm seeing the Earth (capitalized of course) going through detox!. AWESOME!.
I think it was Regwah who once said something along the lines of
"We should planet better !. !. !."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Acts of God compared to bodily functions!. Awesomely metaphorical!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Brilliant!.!.!. Love the metaphors and imagery!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I could really debate the concept, but the words did create a striking emotion !.!.!. so I must admit this is a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The Earth needs a doctor, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds alot like this darn flu I've been fighting for the last week!. Good poem ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have never had a volcano!.!.!.But woke this morning to the usual downpour!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com