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This is one of those pyramid poems!.!. and a link!.!. Do they suit each other!?
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……………Expected to grasp,
……!.!.!.Challenged beyond their years
…!.!.!.!.They fed their tears,!.… to pillows
…!.…Eyes unable to translate visions
…!.Hearts aching, feeling abandonment
Those whom they loved, evaporated, gonehttp://ca!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=jgfokcgIyf!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Truly unique: combination of expressive truth in poetry + soulful voice of sheryl crow complemented by the much suffered god of guitar, eric clapton!.
Brilliant really, and utterly sad!.
Your poem is my truth!.
The song!? What an irony! This morning I read in the news online about a mother and father who fell off a cliff trying to rescue their baby's teddy bear; they were rescued later!. But, were they high on love for their child!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your poem is unique and the form fits the content well!.
The link--parents only taught her to run, that is all should would need!.!.!.
that is what I heard in the very first part of the song!. So with that said, parents are failing their children!.!.!.Yes I would agree on that point!.
in wrapping this up the poem and the link are together if I took the song correctly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I loved your poem!. And this piece is unique with inclusion of the link!. Irony of it all!.
Sheryl Crow: I never liked her!. I liked this song though, and have to admit she has a great voice!.
Eric Clapton: My doctor's "God of Guitar"Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like the poem, not crazy about the song, although the singer is kinda cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
me likes the poem!. the shape is quite distracting!.
good poem, me likes eric clapton too!. t!.y!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The poem is great ,enjoyable !.!.!.!.!.The song on the other hand !.!.!.!.!.!.50/50Www@QuestionHome@Com
usage of words niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
Great poem Musing!.!!!!
I readily liked your poem or even can say your Pyramid!.!.!.
u are showing lots of love today for children!.!.u know my heart aches for them!.!.!.keep them comingWww@QuestionHome@Com