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More poetry!. GOOD!?!? NOT GOOD!?
I wrote this just now, just curious to see what you say!. please comment!.
I see that you're sad
And you hurt inside
Was it your dad!?
Or all of his lies!?
When the world goes
To greet you everyday
You see them as foes
And turn and walk away
Whoever neglected you
Should feel your pain
They would hate the new
Guilt they would gain
All the things that you feel I want them to see
But I slowly start to realize it was meWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow! this is a really great poem! :P as i was reading it made me wonder who caused this pain and how the poem would end!. like if u see a girl who is really sad and ur thinking whoever the guy was, he was a fool to hurt her or let her go!. anywho thats just what i was thinking when i was reading ur poem!. its awesome! :P and is this true!? and if so who did u write about that u hurt!? just wondering lol!. Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its good, i like it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow i think thats really good!!
i really felt it when i was reading it if you know what i mean xDWww@QuestionHome@Com
I really liked it alot!. It flows real well, and i dont know, its just a really great poem!. good job/Www@QuestionHome@Com