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Question: Will someone rate my poem!?
Hit me
use me
abuse me with your words
maybe then id feel something
waiting,
ive waited for you
to hold me
hold me tightly
never let go
never let me go
but too numb
too numb to feel your touch
your lips
one lifeless kiss
no feeling, no love
no tears to save my soul
no love to fix me
alone
lonely
alone
fix me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
7/10!. It is good, but flow could've been better!. And the words you used were the typical words used in poems!. Be more unique maybe!. But I really did like it!. I was just trying to help:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I guess if a twelve year old wrote it, then it's lovely!. But for someone older, you should add a little more "pizazz" to it and make it sound a little more sophisticated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just by reading this i can tell you have a gay crush on your friend!. You need to stop cutting yourself with razors and get over it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Boring, bland and it reads like every other teen angst poem!. It's simple and the structure is terrible!. Nothing about it stands out I'm sorry!.

I'll give you a 1 for emotion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!.
I think it's really good!.
I'd give it a 9!.0/9!.5 but then again, I'm not a poem critic or whatever!. lol :P
Good Luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

for one, you aren't 12!. and secondly!.!.!.the counselor is a nice person to visit!. ;) I continue to love this poem and your use otf repetitionWww@QuestionHome@Com

i agree with Micheal!.!.but why did she say to see a counsler!?
lmao

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Wow, I amazed a 12 year old can write something like that! I'd honestly think it's pretty cool!. Definitely very emotional!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good 9!.9/10! need more flowWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow

i thought it was going to be stupid,its good

--on a scale 1-10--
seriously id give it a 9Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, this is a good poem right here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

8/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

having love prblems i am on your side!. youre the best poet ive seen !.better than jack frost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!
maybe a little more flow!.!. but other then that its amazing!.
its moving, i guess u could say!. :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it so much but put some more flow and more energy!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's scary but really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

that was GREATWww@QuestionHome@Com

ohhh me like 100%Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT!!!
i feel the same way!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah its good, but SO depressing, i agree with ya teacher!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i agree with my me!. more flow buy very GOOD!Www@QuestionHome@Com