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Question: Would you read my new poem please!?
Lifeless

Winter white all around,
I feel soft footsteps,
They make no sound!.

Like gentle whispers on the wind,
The only thing to hear,
That fate-less hymn!.

The dull thrumming in my blood,
A gnawing pain,
What have I done!?

Crimson gripped into my fist,
Painless cuts,
Upon your wrists!.

Eyes screwed shut and one hitched breath,
Were it my words,
That brought your death!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Think it's great! Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.
Great poem, i like the last stanza!.!.
:)
Perhaps you could comment on mine!?
http://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!. :) xxxWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful poem!. Like the way it makes someone see how much even words can hurt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com