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Posey’s
St!. Marks River
Home of topless oysters
Opulent, forlorn join forces
Good times

Long bar
Filled with pleasures
Many colored bottles
Propensities, possibilities
At bay

Guitar
Music heals the soul
When strummed by handsome dude
In Stetson hat and cowboy boots
Soooweeet

Slow dance
Faces touching
Bodies travel slowly
As lovers whisper sweet nothings
Tonight

Moon glows
Over water
As patrons watch the stars
And listen to the evening call
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i like the way you say!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!."topless oysters"!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the only phrase struck me was " home of topless oysters!."
topless oysters ! very imaginative! me thinks you are getting hold of the formal cinquain!. me thinks you keep with it untill you get goot grip on it!. t!.y!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like topless oysters, a great line!. This is a difficult form, I feel!. You painted a mellow story!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good thing oysters are served at this bar!.!.!.!.stamina and all!
Very titillating, this was! Created the mood very nicely!.

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When the topless oysters start slinging champagne!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I am getting out of there

Nicely arranged, Good show!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have painted well the words you speak are easy to see!.

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I think I need to hang with you, girl! Liked!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

tickles!.!.!. like a memory or dream!.!.!. thinks we missed a lot of it!.!.!. enjoyable read!.!.!. thanks!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com