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Question: Is this a good poem!? !?
This Love

If there was a song
If there was a movie
If there was a girl
If there was a color
Is would call it Selena

She is the one I love
The one I like
The one I crush on
The girl I don't know

She is so beautyfull
Like a rose next to sunflower
Such is bright
But your all I see

This love hurts
Talking about someone
Whom I don't know
That stole my heart

Some say it's a crush
And it will to away
But if it was then I won't write this
My love for is hard
I see you as who I want you to be
But not who you are
Only if I met
Then I won't love you
This love

Me and Gomez, Selena
( If you tell me about her it will hurt, if you let me talk to her it won't )Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow!!
you really like her!!
it's great!.!.!.

if Gomez would read this,
she'd be astounded!.!.!.
'cause as much as beautiful it is,
it's so charming! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com