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Question: I am curious!. Good or bad!?
This is one of the first poems that I wrote so it's not the best but!.!.!.


Where am I headed!?
This free fall to hell!.
Where am I headed!?
Only time will tell!.

What is my purpose!?
In this game they call life!?
What is my purpose!?
I've been thinking all night!.

As my life unfolds!.
I stand by and watch!.
As my life unfolds!.
I get tied in a knot!.

This downward spiral!.
Has got a strong hold!.
This downward spiral!.
Makes my heart cold!.

Every day that I live!.
I get closer to death!.
Every day that I live!.
Greatful for each and every breath!.

Look on the bright side!.
Though we all die sometime!.
Look on the bright side!.
Heaven we shall find!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is beautiful
successful use of repetition
good workWww@QuestionHome@Com

brother, that is NOT BAD!.

not bad at all!Www@QuestionHome@Com