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Question: Help with a song lyrics!?
ok i have this song in Arabic, and i need to translate it to English, I translated it literary but i need some help to put it in proper english and make it more poetic, i will appreciate it so much
(Are you from the rest of humans!?
or you're from the angels on the moon!?
my eyes adored your face
my heart starts beating again when you show up
then i realized that my soul adored you
you who is more beautiful than all the humans
would you believe me if i told you
that, in a heartbeat, i loved you
i felt like i own
this whole universe when you laughed)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Okay!.!.!. here's what i think it would sound like in regular english!.!.!.
Are you derived from humans!?
or are you one of the angels from the moon!?
My eyes adored your face,
and only when you return can my heart beat again,
and my soul adores you,
you, the one, who is more beautiful than the rest!.
Would you believe me if i told you,
that it took a heart beats time to love you,
and I felt like I owned the whole universe,
when you laughed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A guess that might work and might not!.
Are you derived from humans!?
or are you (from a different race),
Like some heavenly angle,
My eyes adored your lovely face!.
My heart, as we're apart, won't beat again,
Unless you return, I will bear all that pain
for my soul adores you, you are the best,
and my heart is longing for your blissful rain
Would you believe my story
And how I fell in your glory:
your wide smile, in no time
caught my heart in perfect rhyme,
felt the whole world is mine,
that much I love darling!.!. I' really doooooooooo!!.
Hope it helped!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
oddly, I cannot help you
as I like how it sounds the way it is!.
I suppose it is just the mood I am in
I shall star you any how!.!. see if any one sees it and responds!.!.
g day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW Keep it! @_@
LOVE it as it is!
XOXOXxx ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love it as it isWww@QuestionHome@Com