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Question: Is this too lame a write to even bother commenting on!?
Find
Find in your heart
the words to describe
the soul of the one you love
Find in your soul
the music to describe
the heart of the one you love
Then
Find in you core
the courage to speak
the words about the one you love
Find in your core
the courage to sing
the music about the one you love
And finally
Listen
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would love to sing this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I first thought of lyrics to a song!.
I think it is!.
On YouTube type "instrumentals"!. Various music will appear!. Read this while you listen / search for a beat you like!.!.!.!. then expand the verse maybe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No - I post lots of "lame" stuff on here and this isn't lame!. Plus - I don't think think people are that much of poetry snobs to slam you!.
That being said - Work with it, there's a lot of good fodder here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
form time to time i prick my nose to remove all the waste and dirt inside of it,i think today you have done the same thing here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Most words lacks power until they are combined; beauty, love and music are there to enjoy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is not lame
at allWww@QuestionHome@Com
I very much enjoy your works!. Keep it up!. This one is sweet simplicity and left me with a smile!. Nothing that makes you smile is lame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is superb - crisp and to the point!. My only suggestion would be to replace "and finally" with "now!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
No!. It's a very sweet thought!. Don't apologize or put yourself down!. I think it is even uplifting!.
I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Tender words, important last line!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Simply sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Seek, and you will find!. It's a lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No!. And lovely advice it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I've got lots of searching to do!.
A nice poem!. I suppose if we seek it, we'll find it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com