hi guys , how can I improve this, or any pointers for me, it my first ever poem and im really not the type to write this kinda stuff but i thought i give it a go, thanks!
The poor child and his angels
I am the poor child
Innocent and sweet
Grew up on mischief
With not many treats
I learnt to rely on myself
For the food that I eat
For it was a tough life being a poor kid from the street
Met a true friend
When the chips were down
Became brothers overnight
Stayed loyal till the end
Was always there with smile or frown
Life has its course
And indeed his time had ended
Although be it by force
It was on me to keep my word
As in me was his trust
For we had an oath
And keep it must
I am a father a son a brother and breadwinner
I have found the means to maintain my word
I have given back more than I could hope for
So I can say …!.!.I am no longer a poor child
Today I am a wealthy man
I should feel lonely
But I know I can never be alone
For even when u see me alone in the rain
Don’t be fooled my friend
I have cover under their wings,Www@QuestionHome@Com