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Question: What do you think of my first song!?
I've Lost Control

I'm sitting in the dark here!.
I am watching a movie!.
It feels like de ja vu!.
I've seen it before
Why is this happening, they have done this once before!?
why won't they stop!?

Well this is my life,
My life
But I've lost control!.
And if it's my life,
my life
Why do you control it!.

I'm stuck inside this movie!.
I feel like I might die here!.
I want to leave this place
I've tried to run away!.
What's the point of being here, if I can't change the script!?
why can't I leave!?

Well this is my life,
My life
But I've lost control!.
And if it's my life,
my life
Why do you control it!.

Now I'm at the ending!.
It came just like expected
I gave up on trying
,just let you have control
How did we ever get here, the sad part is I know!.
Why did I know

Well this is my life,
My life
But I've lost control!.
And if it's my life,
my life
Why do you control it!.

Well Now it's over!.
Over
But I can't look away!.
And if it's over,
Over
Why do I still try!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Dam girl!.!.the lyrics is very cool!.!.!.!.from 1 to 10 i give you 9!.!.!.!.I would like to hear it with a rhythm!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com