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Question: What is a flower, to you!?
Not from personal experience!.!.!. Inspired by something I have read and the morning glories which I saw sometime ago!.!.!. Just thought it will be interesting to write!.!.!.

Lilac buds, pistil
caressed with sunlight, chaste,
a virgin flower!.

Vines of dawn, entwine,
curling, twisting into one,
a lush union, two!.

Sunrise, warmth and light
noon, heat and friction ablaze
growing, full blossom!.

Red dusk, pale sun sets
morning glory, dims and hides,
flowerless virgin!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yours is the epitome of Haiku!.

Only one minor point!.!.!.!.

S1 L2 - missing one syllable -

"modest" is a synonym for chasteWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think, wow!. A different type of love poem!. You've outdone yourself here!. clappingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ah!.!. The beautiful and wanton vs the plain and petulant!.!.!.
Very nicely done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that's amazing!.!. took my breath away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com