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Question: Opinions/advice on this!?
When ever im talking to you, the world stops and revolves around you!.
Everything that processes from you, makes any word i could say, non existant!.
Their are million things to say, but not a word to speak!.
You are amazing in everyway, it keeps me in awe!.
Waking up giggling, smieling all day!.
Not being able to go to sleep, becuase youre better than any dream

Tell me what i can do to improve it, what i should add, take out!.
I know, My spelling sucks, dont tell me!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like it!. i dont think u should chane anything!. great job!. keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com