A new love poem - Comments?

Question: A new love poem - Comments!?

Freedom
======

Go
pray
in the Mall
while a
freed man
swears
You are
free to hear
a fat preacher
swear
You are
lesser
of evils
if You
want!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Freedom does not guarantee
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o
v
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!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Irony!. I love it!.

Man, you are the pun king: swear as in curse and swear as in an oath!. If I tried to write a poem on that trope, it would be sappy as hell, but you pulled it off!.

A very interesting point: the 2nd person pronoun You is always capitalized, even in the pentultimate line when it isn't the 1st word!. It's a little, subtle thing that speaks volumes!.

Did you check out Kay Ryan's poems yet!? I bet you'd like em!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

please help me understand what it is about!.!.!.!.everyone else seems to get it!.!.!.i don't!.!.!.

i feel so stupid!.!.!.i'm really sorry!.!.!.can you please explain it to me!?

can you please help me out!?

http://au!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.

please be as honest as you can!.

thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fat! who you calling fat!?!

Just kidding!.

I wonder when we'll get to the point of religion and spirituality being available at the mall, in a combo!. Guess the time is now!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fascinating, like a Rubik's cube!. I'm still turning it round and round trying to line things up so that final clunk leaves it in order in my mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see a political flare to this one!. Mall is capitalized as in Washington!?
Inauguration!?

Just my take, I may be over thinking things again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.!.Awesome, nice, and straight to the point :D

I like the rhythm, because it seems so aggressive, like you're giving people a sermon! It's awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

True, but the transfer of power is peaceful, at least that is something to love!.

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This is good, sweetie!. I pray the fat man preaches love, just love!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

most definitelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Like so many spruikers trying to sell me their hair products!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem

Choices!. We all have them!.

God bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Didn't Santa Claus leave the mall like, a month ago!?!?!?

<---he was a baaaaad boy :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds more like the airport - but I get the idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thought provoking!.!.!.!.!.pass the paracetemol!.!.!.I'm not used to doing it!.!.!.!.thinking, that is!.!.!.!.!.

Ah, but today of all days, a Thin Man will be swearing and preaching!.!.!.!.to the people in the Mall, while some stand and pray!. Evil didn't get a ticket to his one!. Somewhere a Fat Preacher will be swaying, reaching out and "uhuh-ing"!. Such is Freedom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok!.!.!.I want!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love!? To each his own
Shortcomings touch us all

You post an interesting few words, but!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.there's more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sure they swear a lot!.!.!. specially if you stamp on their foot!.!.!. I don't want their love man!.!.!. that would be sick!.!.!. lookin good ibl!.!.!.!. ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

when the fat preacher swears!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.does he cross his fingers!?

just wondering!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And that, my dear!.!.!. is what love is all about!. *sob*Www@QuestionHome@Com