Water in a wooden bowl,
swirling,
a slice of orange on its edge!.
A black ant climbs
the arc of the rind!.
Pink fingers pluck life
from life!.
We really don't have a clue,
do we!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> Will you comment about a comment?Question: Will you comment about a comment!? Water in a wooden bowl,
swirling, a slice of orange on its edge!. A black ant climbs the arc of the rind!. Pink fingers pluck life from life!. We really don't have a clue, do we!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: we killed a tree to make the bowl emptied the tap to fill the bowl Plucked a tree to kill the fruit sliced it up to decorate!.!.!.!. The ant was an innocent bystander!. Not pretty enough Not edible enough A total and utter threat to humanity as we know it!. A justified death!? That's for you to decide!.!.!. That's all from me at the crime scene Back to the studio!.!.!.Bob!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Swirling water in a wooden bowl can represent the ocean on a calm day, the orange slice on its edge, provokes stimulus of sensual peaks and valleys, the black sugar ant climbing the arc of the rind can represent reach goals and desires of attainment, pink finger (hence fresh life/ plucking life from life a birth or rebirth of life)!. We don't hva a clue because we choose to be clueless!. Thank you, for the though provoking morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I am stuck on your "swirling"I don't for a moment think you should change it,no!.!.but I see the ant against the rind so brightly and the "water in the wooden bowl" so clearly I'm left asking what movement is making this swirling,it is on it's own followed by a comma,!.!.!.that's an intriguing image,perhaps a symbol of the overall movements that move us all,a force that only something as sensitive as water,can reveal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com No matter what else happens, there still exists the chaotic randomness of life, and a few of us occasionally take the time to observe the moments as they happen, irrespective of the outcome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It gets the the point where you are right, I really dont have a clue !.!.!. wtf are you talking about!? And then I remember, do I care anymore!? Well see!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com no!.!.!. let the ant be and drop a tab already!.!.!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com The anty hero!. Gosh there are a lot of words with ant in them, must refrain from responding with a rhyming list!. lol I like your poetic comments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Have you ever seen What people look like from an airplane!? Not ants but Microbes All in all We are so cluelessWww@QuestionHome@Com That's why I let ants & mice live in my double-wide upright refrigerator box house!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow, this is great!. Simple, yet thought provoking!. Well done!. I would love your thoughts on mine: http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Still Life with Ant!. I think the ant is the clue!. -Www@QuestionHome@Com Poor little ant!. Don't ants have any rights!?Www@QuestionHome@Com My comments mean nothing!. It is the author who has to understand what they wrote!. That is Paramount!.Www@QuestionHome@Com *TWO SNAPS* I need a moment to compose myself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Really nice!! Sad but true, we can be very clueless, we could stand to learn a thing or two!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com We have a clueless connectedness to all!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com that is so sadWww@QuestionHome@Com All we have to do is be happyWww@QuestionHome@Com we drown on spin cycleWww@QuestionHome@Com Not a one Buk !.!. not a one!. But besides the "clueless-ness" !.!.!. I can see the ant climbing the arc and those fingers coming in for the kill!. I like it!. Short, but sweet!. * I can see why the Level One troll here named him/herself "Show some respect"!. It's obvious isn't it!? Tell you what !.!.!. I'll hold 'em down !.!.!. you piss in their eye! That'll teach 'em respect! Pfft! ?Www@QuestionHome@Com |