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Question: What do you think of my first poem ever!?
I wish that I can be free

I do not know who you are

but you hold hostage my soul

I never know where to start

You rapture thoughts in my dream

I wish I did have the chance

to escape from this thing

this is my life at a glance

sometimes I'm glad you show up

but I should lower my gaze

and then my heart gets boiled up

I know I can't have my way

you come in all shapes and forms

and make me think I will win!.

and when I think its ok

you start fighting again

I need to get out this cage

let it be let it be

I'm just too tired some days

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Omg!.!.that is so cute! Wow !.!. Let me guess!.!. this poem is about a man who is in love with this woman, who drives him crazy, but it drives him crazier to know that he can't pursue her, or at least he doesn't know how to!.!.deep inside all he wants is to unite with her!.!.
Bravo for your first poem, I like it
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