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Question: Opinions and interpretations of this poem !?
Ok so i wrote this poem and i want to know what you all think of it as well as i want to see how many people can see and understand its interpretation and meaning!.


Your hurting me
With out even knowing it!.
And i wont utter a word!.
You say that you still love me
But boy i see the spark that lights up in your eye
And her face reflects in the corner or your heart
While my name is conforming in to a ghost!.
And now i wonder what your thoughts are all about
As my heart keeps on beating and you keep on leaving
The tears in my eyes are all dried up !.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's clearly about a boy who admires another female!.

Nice to see people still write poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sound like its about a girl who has given up on a boy who says that he only sees her as the person he likes but is obviously looking at someone else without even noticing that that hes hurting the other!.Www@QuestionHome@Com