rate one of my poems?

Question: Please critique/ rate one of my poems!?

http://bethanyecho!.piczo!.com/!?cr=1

just click on one of them under "my pages!." pages one two and three also have poems on, even though they are not titled!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hey I really enjoyed reading your poetry, you clearly have quite a talent!. I myself like writing poetry and have quite a collection now so Im going to give you the advice other people give me, start sending your poems into magazines and competitions and get a little name for yourself, try to eventually get your poems published!.!. A good goal to work towards I would say ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com