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Question: This was part of my class's 3 minute writing exercise!?
Alright, so we had a three minute writing exercise during class, and here's what I came up with:

That gentle smile, it takes me back,
The angelic laughter, it fills me with glee,
Those soft palms, they feel what I see,
That twisted temperament, something not used to be!.

I can stand the pain you inflict on me,
I can stand on my own, I've been free,
I can escape to wherever I want,
Weather, land, or sea,
But I limit myself only,
To you loving me!.


I'm sorry it was a bit rigid on some lines, but it was three minutes, and half the time I was staring at one of my closest friends who is a girl >!.<Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow that's a lot more than what i would have got done !.Www@QuestionHome@Com