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Question: Lines for a poem !?
I have no cule what to put in a poem im wirting for my boy :/
I just need some lines to help me out!.
Uh, some help about what the lines should express:
I love him, i cant stand being away from him for a seond with out him, he always makes me giggle, always keeps me on my toes and speechless!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Except for needing spelling correction and a little attention to layout, I think it's a darn good poem you've written, right there!. Much better than the many stilted 'Ode to My Boyfriend/Girlfriend' that we see here, precisely because it addresses your own feelings in a way that is not too introspective and pleading for understanding as most are!.

My mother was a great writer, with her own modern-style 'slice of life' radio program in '50s Memphis, Tennessee!. When (about your age at the time) I asked her how to write something good, she said: "Imagine you run into a room where there are some friends!. You say, 'THERE'S SOMETHING I JUST HAVE TO TELL YOU!'!. Write like that!."

I'd say you've followed those directions well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

write any thing ,wat ever it is , it should be from ur heart and true emotion , feeling don't need a perfect format it will definetly work for u and good luck ,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.i hope for the best for uWww@QuestionHome@Com