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Question: A forwards backwards etheree in response to Jellz simple etheree!. A poem!? !?
If
the bed
of roses
that you lie in,
seems to be prickly;
comfort not to be found;
if the scent is negligent;
It might be wise to desert it
and return to smelling the roses
as on your way through life you pass them by
I found the roses to be filled with pricks,
discomfiting, making life a *****
I found that eating cherries will
land you sitting neatly in
the pits!. Lemons will yield
lemonade if you
gently squeezing
add sugar
water
drinkWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Nice work - if you centrally justify this format does it turn into a large Diamante!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hold on just a second!.!.!. No rhyme scheme!.!.!. No sense of syllable math!.!.!. I don't understand!.!.!. This is merely another free verse! Humph!.!.!. ok, let me tease the mind!.!.!.

Shall
A trill
of Golden
topped trees be ill
Hold against this gale!.
With might so tall and proud
and if the owners own will
Does bring to us a sound so loud
That even most tempest wind now fail
With no pressure on these gods of fallen
These sounds of birch and pine weak and pale
To the skies their great power vowed
With no pride this old tore bill
Winter caps melt on shelve
like twinkling bell
of God's own, till
this olden
tore bill
sail!.
Rhymed with abcbadbdacadbdabcba and syllables 1 through 10 and descending!. Oorah!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I never understood the beauty of roses; there are many more pleasant flowers!.

What if life hands you cows!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i must lie in the bed i made last night!.!.!.it is very prickly and no sugar in the world will help this lemon!.!.!.great poem hit home right now badWww@QuestionHome@Com

Who are those pricks in the roses!?!?!?

Cute, very cute, for lack of a better term right now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is funny, lots of old standards with a new twist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow I really like it keep writing! :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

even my fart sounds better then what you have written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com