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Question: Hows my poem!? (ill always love you)!?
our forced smiles

our crazy jokes

the way we talked

the way we laughed

those memorys ill cherish forever

and im ready to say

i miss you

ive told you i miss you

but i havent told them

i miss you

so i miss you

and i know your in a better place

but that doesent make it any less of a heart ache

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im 13 for the reccordWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its a good poem but if ur trying to make the poem make ppl feel sad its not really tht sadWww@QuestionHome@Com