Attempted 'Than Bauk' joined verse, What do you think?

Question: Attempted 'Than Bauk' joined verse, What do you think!?

Than Bauk
********
I did not tell
When I fell down
And well enough
I am tough, yes!.
Enough to do
Stuff like judo
Let us go now
I’ll show you how
No more falling
Wind squalling now
Calling my nameWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

And it calls,
actually yells
but you
don't care
cause you tough
Bauk tough
and you
know Judo!

I have no idea 'Than Bauk' but I usually have no idea! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I see you've followed the syllable rules for the first three lines!. I understand this is a descending step form!.

It was fun to read!

Just for my own curiosity, I wrote it upside down (completely loses its form, but just for fun for me):

Calling my name
Wind squalling now
No more falling
I’ll show you how
Let us go now
Stuff like judo
Enough to do
I am tough, yes!.
And well enough
When I fell down
I did not tellWww@QuestionHome@Com

u keep writing for fun and i will keep reading for fun!.!.!.I think i understand this form
EDIT: now i get it!.!.!.wow i cant do thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

tell fell well!.!.!. ok
nough stuff nough!.!.!. ok
do ju us!.!.!.!?
now you more!.!.!. !?!?
ing ing ing!.!.!. ok

Of course, it may lose something in the translation from Vietnamese!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

calling my name
to slip and slide
on the ice!
I guess
I'll stay inside!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like the internal rhyme!. Good one, of course!.
I just looked this up!. How did you find it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very fun!. I'm not ready to try it, but I like the flow!. How about Tai Chi!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

this has potential
you could work on it a bit more
but nice try thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com