I'm trying to break into the poets society but i have'nt got any writing

Question: I'm trying to break into the poets society but i have'nt got any writing apparatus!.Try This!.!?

Harvest
The warrior who tends his sword
Shall see it serve him well
Then he may pass it to his son
Before the Passing bell

Yet he whose virtue is misplaced
Has walked another way
And poor shall be his wretched lot
Upon the Judgement Day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I like the whole 'comparing righteousness in life to an inanimate object' thing (The warrior who tends his sword / Shall see it serve him well)!. Somehow it sort of reminded me of an Emily Dickinson poem (maybe that's because she wrote so much about death)!.
I also love the title "Harvest"!. A brilliant choice for a poem about death!.
Overall I give it an 8!.8 out of 10 (possibly up to a 9!.3)!.

Keep writing : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

here's my version!.!.!.

The incoherent-part2-lonlinness!?

Alone was I when I was born !?
Or it was meant to carry on
Through life despairs and happiness
Thinking of u my dearest friend
We’ grown apart and left alone
As days goes by and night are so !.!.
Still me being here all alone
No wonder why ……!.
Don’t care for more…!.
!.As being surrounded by my failure
Life ‘s neither less was good to me
Being here all alone so far
No wish or hope
Can make me alive…!.
As night is falling upon me
The darkest sleep unfolds me
Leaving in shadow just a breath
No tears,wispers ……not just a kiss
!.…!.!.

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Sounds forced to me!. Be more yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com