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Question: Free thought and free will!.!.!.!.truth hurts!.!.!.!.!?
The sign before you left the canal of birth
Read: "Abandon all hope ye who enter here!."
So begins the endless cycle of despair,
Misery, hope, the opium of masses!.
To deal with the real hell; to live and to fear
Death with uncertainty of the truth as men
Will force upon you things you will believe, you
Choose to make a life of freewill and freedom
Of choice!. Best to look on your journey through the
Turmoils of life as men of power under
The guise of 'freedom' and 'brainwashing' so that
You may labor for life for the benefit
Of God and Country, in which you will remain
Just above the level of poverty as
Fat cats sit on fat arses eating your soul
And money with food and fornication that
Have long existed!. I am you and you are
Me!. Do not be blinded by the handicraft
Of speech writers telling you what you need to
Hear; empty promises, and ill bantor!. I
See though eyes of glass, fanaticism with
No thoughts of hope!.!.!.passive listening!.!.!.hopes for
More money, welfare, reparations, and "What
Can you do for me today!?" is the question
Our most beloved land should ask our 'leaders'!.

As our people suffer, our leaders have saved
The rich once again, hoping they won't jump to
Their deaths, which would be a wonderful highlight
On a "Wacky Video Show"!. I assume
Most of the populace would enjoy this scene!.

As you lay dying, listen for the dirge of
Hoofbeats on cobblestone paths and pretend they
Are for you and the gracious life you've lived for
Your fellow man!. Sadly the dirge will be your
Failing heartbeat as you enter to a non
Existant state; the same you knew before birth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's so much emotion here!. So much 'truism'!.

I like it!.

"sadly the dirge will be your failing heartbeat!.!.!.!. " telltale!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is very well thought out and rings with so much elegance and truth this is good looking forward to reading your next write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Alas, yes!. This is good enough to go over it and edit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is such a deep and well written poem!!!
I really commend you for your work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

a callous torment, a moment in time
the hoof beats are louder, is it just in my mind!?
I wander seamlessly no beginning no end
I caught here loosely in a warm delirium!.!.
Jump! I say loudly!.!. and a row of fat vultures
unable to fly lay dead at my feet
as I laugh the hideous laughter
of the wickedly deranged!.

Never assume!.!. presume!.!. please!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com