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Question: Poem I made"mirrors" (I am going to change some stuff!.!.!.)!?
!.!.rubbing soap into my eyes

Cleansing the mind!.


While washing away


the memories!.


The memories that


keep me locked


in my mind of stone


and hid away


in my heart of glass!.


No matter how hard I try


the fantasy will always be


the reflection of the reality!.


The reflection that confuses me


not knowing whats real


whats fake


whats in between!.


not knowing life is like


not knowing yourself!.


not knowing your


self is like


a room of mirrors!.




rubbing soap into my eyes

Cleansing the mind!.


While washing away


the memories!.


The memories that


keep me locked


in my mind of stone


and hid away


in my heart of glass!.


No matter how hard I try


the fantasy will always be


the reflection of the reality!.


The reflection that confuses me


not knowing whats real


whats fake


whats in between!.


not knowing life is like


not knowing yourself!.


not knowing your


self is like


a room of mirrors!.


rubbing soap into my eyes

Cleansing the mind!.


While washing away


the memories!.


The memories that


keep me locked


in my mind of stone


and hid away


in my heart of glass!.


No matter how hard I try


the fantasy will always be


the reflection of the reality!.


The reflection that confuses me


not knowing whats real


whats fake


whats in between!.


not knowing life is like


not knowing yourself!.


not knowing your


self is like


a room of mirrors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i liked it!.

it is deep and i understand what you mean!.

it seems you put a lot of time and effort and that something in your life must have impacted or compelled you to write such a beautiful poem!.

i like how it doesnt rhyme because it gives me a chance too actually read word for word and try to analyze and understand

i like how its repetitive because it makes the poem seem like your soul searching and i believe those really imapct ppl the most and make them think:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it simply one verse, If you want it longer you need to change it up!.

Writing the same verse three times is redundant to the extreme!. Repetition only works when it is done tastefully and serves a purpose!.
The only purpose it served it this case was to annoy my brain cells at reading it 3 times over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com