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The sorrow is all mine
By Jellz Fisher

This
moment
left hanging
waiting, so long!.
Why is it always
bad news stops time somehow!?
Truth would too soon be revealed!.
Washing his hands like Pilate did,
I saw it in his face, as he said:
“Sorry lady, the transmission’s had it”Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Haha!. You had me! I was holding my breath waiting for some awful revelation of a horrendous diagnosis or something!. Sorry about your car, though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This
Quite fine
Etheree
Left me hanging
Although well aware
That something was coming!.
The tension mounted slowly
Twas almost more than one could bear!.
But image excessively written
Changed all the grief into comic relief!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank goodness it had a funny ending!.!.!.!.man, I was so worried, well, a dead transmission's no fun, either, but, I was really worried it was gonna be someting terrible!

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This was pure enjoyment! You hooked me from the first word! My heart was beating quite quickly when I got to the punch line! Then I did NOT giggle, I laughed right out loud!.

Good one Jellz!Www@QuestionHome@Com

And God spoke!.!.!.sorry the Aamco Man! Great ending!.

Jellz the Comedy Poetess presents:
Tranny a Go No!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A Jellz-slam!. Brilliant!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one Jellz! You had me for a minute there!Www@QuestionHome@Com