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Question: Do you like this poem!?!? plz read!?
SPRING:

Flowers bloom to breathe the fresh air of spring
The sun rises from the dark night and
covers the earth with warmth and light

Teardrops fall from the sky, so gently that its silent
The daisies dance delightfully
As a swift rush of wind blows through them

i know its rly short lol
but i was wondering is it good so far!?
plz be honest, if u dont like something, tell me
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes your poem is outstanding!. i write poems too, and from one poetic person to another i think this is one very good uplifting poem!. and your right it could be a LITTLE longer but still its one great poem and continue writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!

i write poems too!.!.!.

mostly about what i'm going through, adn about my family, etc!.!.!.
it's a great way to relieve anger without hurting someone!.!.!.!.
lol!

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i like everything, but the part: The dasies dance with deliteWww@QuestionHome@Com

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It's really good!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com