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Question: Shall we dance!? A poem for critique and "Identify"!.!?
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“Shall we dance!?” I asked, His reply “we shall”
So we kicked off our shoes shook ourselves loose
With music inciting, we danced in a thrall
“Shall we dance!?” I asked, His reply “we shall”
Dance beneath moon and stars shining profuse
In the scheme of things, we appeared quite small
So we kicked off our shoes shook ourselves loose
“Shall we dance!?” I asked, His reply “we shall”

We danced together; the stolen night through
Wraithlike, l felt, held gently in his arms
Transposed, exposed he kissed away my blues
We danced together; the stolen night through
With expertise he plied me with his charms…!.
Passions spent, our reflections will imbue
Wraithlike, l felt, held gently in his arms
We danced together; the stolen night through




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
At first the poem seems to repeat too much, but then the beat lingers, haunts and the effect begins to reveal itself!. Nice!.

Loved this line:

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Pair of triolets Karenfied!.!.!.!.!.oops meant!.!.!.!.Nancified!.!.!.!.!.!? That's so funny; I'll add it to the list of my poetry forms learned thus far!.!.!.!.!.!.!. :)

Very unique! It does read like a song as someone else mentioned!.

Moon and profusion of stars; my favorites too!.

Good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

If they are stolen, are the nights truly yours!?

Nice poem!. Very romantic!. Very sensual!. I enjoyed reading it and felt it could only be better if I were there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very muscal!. I have no clue of the type!. I tried to find it!. Tell us please!.

edit: I answered this two hours ago, and just got in my e-box!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not sure of form but this one sings and the repetition makes it so!

'wraithlike, I felt, held gently in his arms'

that does it for me as well!

Good write this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My thoughts were same as Alobar!. Now I want to kick off my shoes and be held gently in his arms as we dance the stolen night through!.

LOVE!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can hear the music!.!.!.soft contempararyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your best -to -date with this form!. (IMHO)

The words Waltz!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

stolen nights!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.are the best nights!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com