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Like the time I saw you, When the grass has the morning dew, Rapidly, Everyone is filled with perplex, Making everything complex!. The ocean waves, Like when you wave to me, Can't you see, Life holds many things, Doesn't it come to your mind, Doesn't life has it ups and downs!? And the turn arounds, Just like the silent cold midnight ocean!. By: Meredith Anything needed to be added!? Was it good, bad, perfect, weird, etc!? Thanks - to the serious answers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it's oddly romantic!. I like it!. nice job!Www@QuestionHome@Com It's OK!. :) Not sure about some of the rhymes!. 'filled with perplex' - doesn't really make sense!. Don't worry about rhymes, work on some original imagery, it's a good start! Answer mine :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Its unique!.!.!.Its really good!.!.!.I also agree!.!.!.I dont like the rhyme tho!.!.its good, but i think when it doesnt rhyme its better!.!.!.maybe u could change it, but other than that, well done! Just add a title, that always completes a poemWww@QuestionHome@Com How about beginning with the end parts: Life has its ups and downs turnarounds like theWww@QuestionHome@Com It is perfect but!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. it needs a title!. And what dose perplex mean!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |