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Question: I have been challenged to write a Partenza Represa!.!.!.!?
How did I do!? I know it is flaky but did I get the form correctly!?

My cat came to me, ice on her fur
Ice on her fur, smiling as she came
Smiling as she came, food her desire
Food her desire, Booger her name!.

Booger her name, this cat I do love
This cat I do love, loyal to me
Loyal to me, only I can pet
Only I can pet, my wild 'kit kat'!.

My wild 'kit kat', black fur to the groung
Black fur to the ground, eyes bright as sun
Eyes bright as sun, nine lives she has lived
Nine lives she has lived, a stalker she!.

A stalker she, mice go on the run
Mice go on the run, when 'er appears
When 'er appears, the huntress kitty
The huntress kitty, a child she be!.

Sandy 1/16/09

Did I get the form correctly and what do you think in general!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
L4S1 has only 8 syllables, all other lines have 9!? Other than that, the form is correct as I understand!. Cute poem!. A lot of cliches that some editing would remove!. Grandfather brought a feral cat home that had gotten her tail cut off by Grandfather's sickle!. Grandma bandaged and the cat lived we believe into her late teens!. A great mouser and a 'prolific' mother!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Challenges are fun!. I have not written one of these yet, tried once but gave up!. Neon seems to have fixed the problem for you!.

Other than that, you have done well, I think!. It was fun to read, and that's important -- for the reader to want to keep moving down the lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i don't know about technicalities of poems,so i don't know whether you got this form correct or not!.but as i read this aloud it felt nice!.

and after reading this my love for cats has increased!.

keep on writing and giggling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it ,it reminds me of Phoebe's song smelly cat in the sitcom FriendsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Firstly,
it is not flaky
It is cute, the form looks right to me, I like it and you did well!
Aren't challenges great!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Forget about OUR opinion! What did Booger think!? Did you even get a "mew" from her!?

Very nice - you are writing like CS "Cat"kin now!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good one!.

Booger is a cool name too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good giggles! I have not attempted this!.!.!.I must!. Congrats to you, well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com