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Question: Comments on a poem about pockets!?
he dug deep in his pockets
turned them inside out
landing his bird
on its belly

sure enough
captain's uniform held
a pocketful of miracles
at least a hundred
and fifty-fiveWww@QuestionHome@Com


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This is really good!.

The Hero of Hudson !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is cute!. I am giggling because the thought of pockets reminds me of an old John Wayne movie--can't remember the title of the stupid thing but "The Walk of the Elephants" the song came from the movie!. (They called one of the characters 'Pockets'!)

I like your poem, Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was trying to figure out the physical gyration needed for "landing his bird
on its belly" - until I realized you were speaking about an airplane!.

To Giggles - I think the John Wayne movie was called "Hatari" and Red Buttons was "Pockets" ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

If only
there were
hundreds of pockets
full
of miracles
to stop
the blood shedding
spilled
every
day!.!.
!.
!.
!.
Nice
Your thought!.
Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Was this about the plane landing in the water!? Where the "bird strike" killed the engines!? Delightful mind you have!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Robin Meade told me "about the plane crash with a gleam in her eye", and you just did with a smile in your voice!.

(I heard a smile--don't argue!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pocket commentary!? Does always seem like a lot of anything to a child! Women don't know what they miss not having pockets!Www@QuestionHome@Com

miracles take all forms!.!.!. I can get a little witchy when the drives strong enough!.!.!.*digs hands into pockets*!.!.!. gotta roll ma!.!.!. nice piece!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Clever!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love pockets, there so practicalWww@QuestionHome@Com

treasuredWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would like just 10 miracles in my pockets Ma!.!.!.Aint gonna happen yet though!.!.heeheeWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is a fantastic read, Ma!. You dug deep into your own pockets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.indeed a miracle!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Digging deep into those pockets, huh Ma!? Good poem!.

nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was really good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dad speaks!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com